A SPECIAL POEM 4 DA ONES I LOVE
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Printed Date: 25 May 2013 at 12:43pm
Topic: A SPECIAL POEM 4 DA ONES I LOVE
Posted By: Jammy
Subject: A SPECIAL POEM 4 DA ONES I LOVE
Date Posted: 20 June 2007 at 12:09pm
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I wanted to post this poem on the literature board but i couldn't. So i thought i could share it here with you: Soldiers killing, People dying, War after war, Our loved ones are
crying. They think the world
wouldn’t give a dame How can they be sure? We give a dame, “MAKE TEA NOT WAR!” We stand and shout
until the night. Bomb after Bomb, Night after Night. Guess Standing wasn’t
enough The War was tough. “Mama mama!” little
girl cries With tears in her
eyes, Little girl is
frightened That mother would die. It seems mother was
powerless But the soldiers
couldn’t careless. The clocks were
ticking, The innocent were dying. (i Hope you all like it because i love writing poems and all the poems i write, come from my heart ------------- Nuff LOve, Salamz |
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Posted By: lovesakeenah
Date Posted: 21 June 2007 at 10:06am
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Salaam alaykum, That was a nice poem.You know,I think it's high time I stopped running.Running from what,you may want to ask.I've deliberately been running away from writing about all the pains,hurts,wars,dyings&killings that surrounds our world today.It's just too hurtful i feel no amount of words would be sufficient to express it.I wept while watching a Documentary about Iraqi refugees in Sudan today.I sometimes avoid watching it'cos it always make me cry&very deep in thoughtIt's too empotional for me.And now,your poem's another re-awakening.Oh!sorry,did I mention that am a Poet by the way?Am very passionate about writing&I enjoy Poetry tremendiously,writing&reading it.So,thank U for the insight.Keep on writing.I hope we'd see more of it cos it's 'thought provoking.it makes us appreciate our freedom ¬ take it for granted ------------- "I have conviction that Allah has power over everything.Verily!Allah's knowledge includes and encompasses everything". |
Posted By: Jammy
Date Posted: 21 June 2007 at 2:51pm
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Thanx for the comment. I would like to read some of your poems if you dont mind
Thanx
------------- Nuff LOve, Salamz |
. I love reading poems. 
Posted By: lovesakeenah
Date Posted: 21 June 2007 at 4:25pm
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You're welcome.Meanwhile,I'd also send U some Poetry sites as well.I've entered quite a number of Poetry Contests.Some,are even in U.K.But am not sure this is d best forum for dat.Am not saying it's 'illegal'.But it kind of feel out of d things we discuss here.Perhaps,I should seek other member's consent before posting some of them.My Poems are usually lengthy.Do U mind brethren?I hope to read more of yours too. ------------- "I have conviction that Allah has power over everything.Verily!Allah's knowledge includes and encompasses everything". |
Posted By: suzy
Date Posted: 22 June 2007 at 2:30pm
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salamz jammy!!!!! its ur ova nutcase friend ere!!! jus thought id send u a comment, telling u how much i luv ur poem, n thefactthat u discuss real issues, shame i cant write poems may Allah b wiv u... Ameen |
but imma giv u sum ideas n u can mak ma dream a reality!
Posted By: lovesakeenah
Date Posted: 23 June 2007 at 11:21am
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As-salaam alaykum Jammy, I just discovered an Islamic Poetry website& posted 2 Poems on ttheir site.Though,it's stil under review.U may check it out:www.IslamicPoetry.org. Meanwhile,d sites I was talking about are non-Islamic Sites.Check ur private mail (pm) I'd send them.
------------- "I have conviction that Allah has power over everything.Verily!Allah's knowledge includes and encompasses everything". |
